Where to find a book editor, who to trust, and how much to pay for book editing and proofreading

Edit – this is a very old article. A newer one comparing editing prices is “how much does editing cost and are you being ripped off?” Also, I had previously said a bunch of stupid things in this post, which were helpfully pointed out to me – I’ve revised the article and I hope it’s less offensive.

An author asked me today for advice about finding a book editor or proofreader. This is a big, serious, important question.

Getting your book edited is not only necessary (although you can get around it… more on that below) but also very expensive.

Editing and proofreading can easily be your biggest expense related to book publishing. So here’s a rather in-depth guide, I hope it answers some of your questions related to getting your book edited.

Why I should get my manuscript edited

Getting your book edited helps you have a better book. You are putting out a product, that will be enjoyed and judged. The easiest thing to mar an otherwise good book is a typo or two. They’re hard to avoid with tens of thousands of words, but more than a couple and you’ll get bad amazon reviews like “should have hired an editor”. Those reviews never go away, and can kill book sales.

Typos and spelling errors mar your credibility as a professional author. In my first book, I wrote “Thrown” instead of “Throne”. Twice.

One reader was so put off about it, he trolled comments about my book and kept repeating how awful this was.

Although people are becoming more tolerant (I regularly find a few typos in trade-published books) and are willing to stretch the limits for indie authors, you don’t want to come off as unprofessional.

The difference between editing and proofreading

Proofreading is when someone goes through your book quickly looking for mistakes. Typos, punctuation errors, spelling problems.

Mistakes are clear and easy to fix (if they can be found). Sometimes you can find a proofreading service that is cheaper than editing, so if you’re sure this is all you need, you can save some money (but I advise against it.)

A good editor, on the other hand, will do all of that but also fix and rewrite poorly worded phrases, sentence structure – so they are actually improving your writing and tidying things up. They will cut out (or “flag” with comments) any big problems.

(Note, some people will offer editing only but not proofreading, so make sure you know what they are doing for you. I prefer “all-in-one” services that just fix everything they can).

When I was doing full time proofreading, besides heavily editing text, I would leave around 10 comments on each page with content critique: characterization problems, plot twists, repetitive words, paragraphs or chapters with no purpose, character motivation, etc.

These are not things that can be “fixed” without a substantial rewrite – so the best I could do is leave a comment to share some writing wisdom.

Unfortunately, this leads into a rather big problem:

If you pay for a good editor, you will need to rewrite

Almost all authors think editing is the final stage before publication. They want someone to clean up their text so they can sell it.

However, the biggest problems with your book are not the typos – it’s the story.

If you had paid for someone to do a manuscript critique of your book, you would get tons of feedback on how to improve the story (which would be bad news, because you were excited about finishing and now you see all these new problems to fix).

Of course you don’t have to fix anything – but a better story will outsell a clean manuscript.

I used to feel bad, knowing I was helping authors improve their book but at the same time knowing they had lots of work to do, and that after rewriting, they would need to hire another editor.

What you need to do first – fix the story!

Join a book club or writing group. Avoid your friends and family – they won’t give you tough, critical advice (OK, some will… but it’s tough to know who is and who isn’t). You can easily set up a group on Craigslist in your city. Get five or so aspiring writers to agree to criticize each other’s work honestly. While you can ignore 1 or 2 criticisms from different people, if several people flag the same issues, you probably need to change it.

Authors are bad at handling criticism. They think they know best, because they understand things better than readers. Don’t be stubborn – listen to feedback (readers will never see the story as YOU see the story; and if they don’t get it, it’s because you haven’t written it well enough yet).

Questions to ask yourself:

What’s the point of my book? Who will read and enjoy it?

What happens? What’s the one, driving plot conflict?

Are all my characters motivated in their choices? Or do they just do random stuff because they are really emotional (check how often your characters “burst into tears” or sob or whatnot. Over-emotional characters are weak and unbelievable.)

Do things happen by cause and effect, or by magical remedy? If you’re writing fiction, check out The Plot Dot. I also made a free book on common editing mistakes, and 25 self-editing tips, you can download here.

How much should you pay for editing and proofreading

I used to charge between 1.5cents and 2cents per word ($0.02USD/word). I still feel that 2 cents per word is average, or “reasonable”. So a 50,000 word book would cost $1000. That’s a big, scary fee – which is why I was uncomfortable charging more. However, I stopped editing, in part, because it’s way too much work for the money. So if you’re looking for a super quality editor, 2cents per word might be too low (you couldn’t buy me at that price, and I’m awesome). These days, although I rarely take on editing work, I would have to charge at least 3 cents per word ($1500 for 50,000words).

But I know editors who charge 4, 5, and 6 cents per word as well. I don’t think they are better editors than I am, but they may have a better business model that allows them to charge more; they may also be better suited to certain projects than I am.

Price can fluctuate widely for editing

Most editors are freelancers. That means we set our own prices.

Edit: I had a long section here about why lifestyle costs, location, hardware and software, and age all impact how much a freelancer charges for a service. It was based on my experience living in dozens of countries over the past 10 years and working with hundreds of authors and freelance editors. However, due to the shitstorm of comments it received, I’ve removed all of it. The shitstorm was well-deserved, and I’ve apologized for it.

It’s enough to say that editors charge different rates, for a variety of reasons, and that pricing is not always or necessarily an indication of skillset or quality.

How to choose an editor or proofreader

Now comes the hard part, actually picking someone to work with. Here are some things I would suggest:

  • Ask on online forums or chatrooms for recommendations by other authors
  • Check out their website and prices (factor in some of the items above – are you paying for their service or for their lifestyle?)
  • Ask for a free sample. Most editors will offer this, if not, ask. For a book, try to get at least 5 pages free. Don’t “trick” them by planting a few mistakes (or do if you want) – focus on how they can improve your regular text.
  • Do this for at least 3 – in the process you’ll also get a chance to see how they respond to emails and treat clients. Your “feeling” about the person is important – although not as important as their skills. A nice person may not be the best editor (I’m kind of grouchy and my customer service is lack-luster. But my aloofness helps me concentrate on improving the text and catching mistakes).
  • Find 10 writers with amazing books in your genre or subject matter and ask if they’d recommend their editor.

I’ve taken it for granted that you’ll be working with an individual, which may not be the case. If you go through a big company, or Lulu/Amazon’s services, you may not know your editor until after you purchase, if at all. This doesn’t necessarily impact quality, but you should know the editor is getting about half of what you pay.

Should I sign a contract?

I tend to be optimistic and have high expectations of people. But contracts are often useful for protecting an editor and making sure the client and editor agree on the exact amount of work to be done, at what price – without one, clients can keep requesting more work and the editor can be taken advantage of.

A professional editor will probably want some kind of contract.

Authors often also want an NDA agreement signed, which I don’t think is necessary. But I’m not a lawyer and you probably shouldn’t listen to me.

If someone steals your work to publish as their own, which I think is unlikely, there are some things you can do about it.

A few editors and proofreaders to check out

And finally, here’s a list of editors and proofreaders. I don’t have personal experience with all of these, but they’ve caught my eye over the years and are doing some good things. They’re worth checking out. I’ve tried to list prices as well. (I’ve left out the big boys, like Lulu, Createspace and SelfPublishing.com – I figured you could find them on your own.)

These were on my radar around 2012, so my comments may be outdated. I should find some new editors to recommend.

Michael Garret. Site is difficult to navigate, but service seems reputable (has worked with Stephen King)

1.5cents / word

Compass Rose. Cute website. They offer too many choices, but you’ll want the “Extended Proofreading”

~1.6 / word

Scribendi.com.

1.5~2 cents / word (but they distinguish between editing/proofreading)

The Ebook Editor. Also does other ebook-related stuff.

2 cents / word

Edit911. More for dissertations, editors have PhD’s, maybe good for non-fiction?

2.1 cents / word

Three Penny Editor. Stunning website.

2~2.8 cents / word (all inclusive)

Lori Handelman. Amazing resume. Former Acquisitions Editor for Oxford UP and others.

4.5 cents / word

Winning Edits. Matthew Gartland is doing some amazing stuff here; well worth checking out and joining the newsletter.

capacity model, $150 per hour – (includes “developmental, line and copy editing”)

A couple more, for UK authors:

The Book Specialist

Adam Croft

I’m sure I’m missing a ton of resources, if you want to add an editing service to this list, just email me the name, website and price/word.

Another way to find editors!

Another excellent way to find editors is to let them come to you. Join a site like Elance, Guru, or Freelancer, and post a project. Be specific about what you need, and include a price range/budget. You’ll receive probably around 20~50 responses. Choosing one can be difficult, but you can read through their testimonials, look over their portfolio, etc.

This is usually how editors start building experience, before they launch their own site, so you might save some money by catching them early in their career (at the same time, they may have less experience….). At any rate, you usually aren’t required to choose someone for your project, so you could just use the process to get in touch with a few good options.

Most sites like this don’t support free samples, but if you find a way to contact the editors directly by email, I’m sure they’d agree to a sample edit.

Do I really need to pay to edit my book?

I don’t think it’s fair to tell someone they cannot publish because they don’t have enough disposable income to hire an editor. And there are books that have sold very well without proper editing – so I’ve learned that editing is not necessarily a sound financial investment: it won’t make or break a book’s success.

It’s a good idea, and of course it will help, if you can afford it. But if you can’t, I don’t think you should take out a loan expecting your book to earn a windfall on publishing.

If you can’t afford an editor:

I fixed my books by getting reader feedback and asking my beta-readers to highlight or flag typos. If you have a committed group of betas, before you release the book out to strangers or make it available, you might be fine.

I would still get the recommended “Free Samples” from a few editors though. If they can’t find anything to fix, you probably don’t need to pay for an editor. But they will probably show you how much you actually need to fix. 5 typos in a whole book is not the end of the world. 50 mistakes will probably upset readers and lose fans.

Join writing groups, trade edits and critiques, find a way to get some fresh eyes on your book – and be open to criticism (though you don’t have to accept all if it, it’s always helpful to see how others will react to your writing).

 

About Derek Murphy

Derek Murphy is a book designer with a Ph.D. in Literature. He's been featured on CNN and spoken at dozens of writing conferences around the world. These days he mostly writes young adult fantasy and science fiction, while helping authors build profitable publishing platforms. Find me

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